PLEASE, feel free to offer your constructive criticism regarding my work. Be REAL, don't sugar coat it! I honestly want to know your true thoughts. If you see something you don't like, tell me. I'm not asking for praise of my work, but looking for hints on how to improve it. I have always been bad at proof reading my own writing. I think its because my brain scans through it rather than reading it word for word. With this work I try to sleep on it and take a fresh look at it the next day to find errors or mistakes that need fixed. Always trying to step up the game in endless pursuit of perfection.